Comments on Bike Posture

For where you are in your triathlon "career" that looks workable to me.  Looking at your leg and heel you MIGHT be a smidge too high still with your seat.....but you're close.

I don't have any comments on your position but recommend you take a look at http://triracebook.com

There is an application in the "My TRB" section called Bike Position Inspector where you can upload a photograph of your aero position and then affix markers to various positions on your body (hip, shoulder, knee etc).  Based on the markers it will generate various angles and give suggestions - i.e. move seat higher, handlebars lower. 

Here's a youtube video that shows how it works:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zA1bb-G7KI0

I found it difficult to move the markers to the precise spot, particularly for the hip and the shoulder, but for a free app its a good start.

I will agree with LB, looks pretty close, maybe a tad high on the seat but looks alright.

The bars do look a bit far away but you will have that with any road bike with clip on's, just the nature of trying to make a TT bike out of a roadie. I tired clip-on's too for a while and found it hurt my lower back after a while trying to stretch to meet those bars. 

My solution was to buy a TT bike, but another option is a "forward" seat post. It angles the seat forward to mimic a TT bike's geometry, basically moves you closer to the aero bars. Looks like they can be had for under $100, might be worth a shot, would get you much closer to a real TT position on that bike.