Bike fit critique please

I agree -- very hard to make anything out of that video.  Try from slightly further away, and straight (90 degrees) to the bike.  A front shot is also helpful.

At the risk of a hijack...

What is the proper way to film a bike fit check?

Parallel to the top tube? Perpendicular to the top tube? How high/low? How long should the video be? I assume just pedaling right? Standing as well? Would there be any sort of references you could put in the shot to assist? A yard stick maybe? Or totally not needed?

x2.. and you might need to move the saddle forward, looks like your knee is too far behind the center of the pedal but again, hard to tell from that angle.

^^^^

Now that right there is funny.

saddle is too high and reach looks short

Shane is spot on (a bit silly of me to say, as he knows more than I do).  My advice: don't worry about details right now.  Look at the pics that Shane posted and think about emulating them in whatever fashion you think feasible.  Pretty much any change you make in that direction is very likely to be an improvement.  After you've worked on that a while, maybe think about getting some personalized advice (e.g., professional fit).

I'm serious.  I personally doubt that specific advice (such as 'lower your seat by Xmm or extend your reach by Ymm) is not the way to go, here.  Just try to emulate those riders and see where it takes you.  Think carefully about what is preventing you from looking like them, and work on that.